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I took her hand and felt its warmth as we began to run.My empire, my home, everything i knew was burning down, but i didn't care. This was the chance for me and her to escape! No never care if the world was crashing down! There was a piece of me that told me i shouldn't ever leave ever time i looked over at her, she took my breath away. I just wanted to stay till i could take this all in.
She had no idea that i was even there.
I tried to get a grip on reality and tell her i was there and tell her how much i loved her but i tripped and slipped over my clumsy, careless words,
words
words...
Now there was too much of me, telling me not to leave. I looked over at her again, she was still breath takingly beautiful. I tried to take in her beauty, I just wanted breathe until I took her in.
She still had no idea that i was even there.
She was so close but i was so far away.
I started to fade away.
"No! Let me dream! Let me stay!" I cried. She was still so close but i was too far away.
She had no idea.
"I can't sleep, I can't dream, I can't change" I whispered as i faded.
I woke up and sat up straight in my bed. Tears poured down my face.
Am i really gone?
"Gilbert? are you okay? Why are you crying? Whats wrong?" Darien asked as she sat up next to me and rubbed my back as i cried.
"it was just a dream" I smiled and kissed her.
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*has little freakout* This took me like 4 hours to write
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Ngh. Now im really tired...and i spent like another hour looking for the damned picture :I
It pretty much supposted to be about the fall of the Prussian empire and Gilberts dreaming that him and Darien are running away from it all but she cant see him cuz hes fading...laladeda he wakes up and its all a dream! The end! :icongilhump2plz:
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~KiyaKumo77 Nov 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
That was intense o3o
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*Ashley7Jones Nov 7, 2011  Student Photographer
Thank you :D
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~KiyaKumo77 Nov 8, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome XD
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:iconromanox123:
Omg i almost started to cry cause it was sad but then i was happy .. i like it no love it even if it did made me cry i still love it
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*Ashley7Jones Nov 7, 2011  Student Photographer
Ffffppppttt *hugs* my brain is broken.
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:iconromanox123:
Awww its okay u did work very hard on it... my brain also hurts because i was typing both Pirate and ur story so it takes awhile plus pirates clothes i had to look up so that took longer then expected
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